The incident began at six o'clock on a fabulous day. The wind started to blow, and the beautiful sky became ugly. It was cold. A few minuts later the sky was dark and there wasn't anyone in the street. Then it appeared a woman runing. She was screaming, 'Help! Please! Help me, please! There is a tornado!' She was crying too. Suddently, it was a tornado behind her. She became to sting in the houses, but nobody answered her. Finally, a man happened in a car. She rose to the car. The driver started to run. But the tornado was very quick and after prosecuting them, the car raised and they disapeared. The tornado crossed the whole city.
The next morning, the sky returned normality. A boy was walking in the street when he saw the woman and the man inoncient in the car. The car had hit with a house. Next to the car, it was a dirty swimming pool. Lucky the man and the woman were ok, but the boy phoned to the ambulance and he took a photografy of the situation.
Five months later, the man and the woman get married. Now they are very happy, but they don't want to remember this disagreeable day. Maybe it will happen again.
1 comment:
Well done. This is also a good essay. You have done a nice job of incorporating quotes from people and using different verb tenses.
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